My rating: 3 of 5 stars
I got this as a freebie on Amazon and the story line intrigued me. Just how far was a man willing to go to give his woman what she wants? Or at least what she says she wants.
I enjoyed this story and loved the majority of the build up, but the ending fell a touch flat for me. I understand the meaning behind it and the simplicity of it, but more than likely a lot of people won't understand the point. Just a touch more to it and I would call it perfect.
If you're looking for a very short, 17 pages, story to read, then this would probably be a good choice for you. Frank Scozzari also has quite a few other good short stories as well.
The link for Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Kill-Me-Chocol...
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